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©2007-2009 =brokenaoshi
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Submitted: October 19, 2007
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This is an alternate costume of Toki's! That I actually want to have made >w< I'm pretty proud of the design, and I really like it... tell me what you think I should improve or change.
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Cute! ^_^ I love the pose.

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Yeah, it's me....what would you expect? :P
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I love you.

Corset might could be betta! ^-^.

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un deux trois~
Damn Good Still though.

Definatly one of your best costume designs!

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un deux trois~
Very innocent eyes. Yay ruffled under-skirts. Petticoats!
ò.Óv /o/ Kawaidesu neh! =3~~
Good job!

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This is pretty okay for normally proportioned characters. Though, you could try to develop shoulder lines to show where that lag in the neck area (it makes the left arm of the girl look like its disjointed). The fluff in the skirt could be rendered with more pencil alteration strokes. Gravity on the hair too, but it seems okay for now. Other than that, keep up the good work.

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This is a sketch and all the details are not included, such as skirt frillies. I was looking for critique in her costume, not her anatomy. As for the gravity, she is landing from a jump. Hair moves.

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the hair and the clothesfolds bring me ultrajoy n 3n

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OH GOD I NEED TO WRITE SOMETHING HERE
:glomp: You bring me ultra joy!! x3

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